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    (Poem) Lost Love

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    Post by The JuJu <3 Wed Mar 04, 2009 3:13 am

    Lost Love

    When I was once a little girl,
    Life was pure white like a pearl.
    Love was simple, love was pure,
    As well as being simply immature.

    I saw my parent’s happy daily lives,
    Thought marriage meant happy wives.
    So I turned and told my papa too,
    When I grow up I’ll marry you!

    He laughed as he carried me high,
    Silly girl, was his only reply.
    Much has since come to pass,
    Many years has since passed.

    Relationships had since come & gone,
    From Love’s games I had withdrawn.
    Living life independent, on my own,
    Doing everything I want, yet all alone.

    That was until you crossed my path,
    And I fell in love with your laugh.
    You were always so caring & sincere,
    And to my life you brought much cheer.

    Until the day you knelt before me,
    Asking: “Would you marry me?”
    Tears of anguish & tears of joy,
    For he, my love, I must destroy.

    I rejected him as I turned & left,
    I knew I left him feeling bereft.
    But my heart, it cried tears of blood,
    And anguish poured out in a flood.

    But still I continued walking on,
    I knew I had to sever that bond.
    For I knew what was to come,
    To love I mustn’t succumb.

    Three months has since passed,
    I smiled as I breathed my last.
    He would read my letter tomorrow,
    And it would be a big blow.

    I’m sorry that I lied,
    I’m sorry that I died,
    But one thing I must tell you,
    Truly, truly, I loved you.



    Hehe.. written by me >.<
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    Post by Fang Wed Mar 04, 2009 8:16 pm

    Holy cow! that's...wow. Well done!! So, was she dieing and knew that she couldn't commit to love, or did she kill herself? Its really sad =(
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    Post by The JuJu <3 Thu Mar 05, 2009 6:26 am

    I was thinking more of a painful 3 month death, probably some critical stage of cancer, which she found out really late and that she broke up with him just before the signs got too obvious.

    But that also happened to be when he proposed to her, so it is a particularly heart-wrenching scenario for her. >.<

    And she didn't want him to suffer watching her die before him, helpless to do anything. But rather, she would prefer him to think that she couldn't commit to the relationship anymore, and left him.

    But at least she left him a letter to let him know that it wasn't him, but her problem, and that she loved him no matter what, and to move on or something.

    And well, I wrote this for a competition, the theme was the sentence "Would you marry me" in the poem. Apparently, I'm a sadist >.<
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    Post by Fang Wed Mar 25, 2009 3:08 pm

    First and foremost LOL to the last thing you said about being a sadist :p

    secondly, that makes sense Smile I'm glad you explained it a bit more. Personally, if I were the guy I would want to be there till the end, so that I could be there to support her, make her comfortable, so that she wouldn't die alone.

    There's a show here in the States called Heroes. I've gotten into it like wo. This last episode one of my favorite characters died. The man who loved her had the ability to enter into people's minds and make them think they were doing things that they weren't. So before she died he flew her to Paris, and to the moon. You kind of have to see it, but it was So touching.

    Anywho, you write very good poetry, and I would definitely give you my vote in a competition Smile

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