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    (Fanfic) Bleach: Dawn of Souls - The Masked Children

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    Post by Terminar777 Mon Mar 02, 2009 11:32 pm

    This is a little project I started a few years back... And so far I've recieved no critism or opinions about it yet from any site I've put it up on... So I'd like it if I could get some feedback from anyone...

    Facts/Notes:
    1. This is an alternate history of the series and does not include any characters from the series.

    2. 90% of the characters within this fanfic were created by me, the other 10% we made by close friends or family. So the rights go the respective owners, and yes I've recieved permission to use them (obviously).

    3. If you want your character to make an appearance in my fanfic, send me a PM and we might be able to work something out. (Right now I'm looking for some VC level Shinigami.)

    4. This is just a single part from the entire series. Dawn of Souls is the main title with The Masked Children being the sub. TMC is part 1 out of 4-5 parts currently, the other will be released once the previous part is finished.


    (I'll post the first 2 chapters in the next post...)
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    Post by Terminar777 Mon Mar 02, 2009 11:38 pm

    Chapter 1
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    Post by Terminar777 Mon Mar 02, 2009 11:39 pm

    Chapter 2
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    Post by Roan Oakranr Tue Mar 03, 2009 1:17 am

    Really cool story. I like the foreshadowing and other stuff you use.

    One of the only questoins I get form here is: What are these guys? But, let me guess, thats what we're supposed to be thinking.
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    Post by Terminar777 Tue Mar 03, 2009 5:09 am

    Yeah there is some foreshadowing... And that in itself is hinting at what they are... More gets explained once it gets closer to the middle (<-- Around chapter 9...)

    If enough people ask I'll exlpain what they are in detail...
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    Post by Fang Wed Mar 04, 2009 8:11 pm

    I like it so far man. I want to see what you can do with this, post up some more chapters Very Happy
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    Post by Roan Oakranr Sun Mar 08, 2009 2:21 am

    Yes, please post more!

    You must or I will destroy a monkey...
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    Post by Terminar777 Sun Mar 08, 2009 2:34 am

    I'll try to get more up... I need to figure out how to make chapters 3-7 not so boring since not much action takes place during those ones... I have chapters 9-11 done... And I'm halfway through 12... (This has a total of 18 chapters, then a summary/recap & spoiler for part 2: The Animal Riot...) So if you guys want me to post those up for now I can... They should keep you entertained for a bit, but you'll miss how the main characters (who you all haven't met yet) got to where they are and why they're there anyways...

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